Miwesa vs. Eighty-eight
Critiques & Comments
# 9
Posted:
Jul 5 2018, 04:47 PM
Yarn: I told you when you showed me the script that this comic was solid. I am really impressed with the way you conveyed the story and the little hints in the enviroment. We got a glimpse of her past, and we finally have a emotional anchor to her plight, a future plotline to hook us and most importantly. A sense of agency and urgency to her plight. I am looking forward to see where she goes next.
# 8
Posted:
Jul 5 2018, 04:34 PM
yarn: The art starts a bit more solid than where it ends up but is still good all around; I had to review 88's backlog to understand who this jackrabbit character was and why he was so relevant to her. When you're dealing with lore from a few years ago try to find a way to better ease into those old details. There's a nonlinear panic felt from the story that really works in your favor, good job with the writing
# 7
Posted:
Jul 4 2018, 03:10 PM
the fortunetelling was such an interesting concept! I like Miwesa's struggle here, her scattered memories and latching onto the wrong things. The lineart is looking good, great pacing and expressions. Solid comic, great job!
# 6
Posted:
Jul 4 2018, 02:42 PM
William_Duel: Just a small comment. Vortigern Reality. Are we going all King Arthur up in here? haha
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I was worried nobody would catch that! Thank you!! ♥
# 5
Posted:
Jul 4 2018, 01:53 PM
Just a small comment. Vortigern Reality. Are we going all King Arthur up in here? haha
# 4
Posted:
Jul 3 2018, 07:30 AM
Thank you Corn! Part of that was an experiment on my part, since I was using a smaller paper than normal to scan at higher DPI to emphasize line texture. I think I like the effect, but I still need to adjust my ratios and not be afraid of "wasting space".
This was definitely a fun comic to do, even with the limitations of real life trying to monkeywrench me!
This was definitely a fun comic to do, even with the limitations of real life trying to monkeywrench me!
# 3
Posted:
Jul 3 2018, 07:26 AM
This was a really cute comic Yarn, some shots I felt without color made Miwesa blend into the flowy background of all the plants a bit much and I think my only other criticism would be I personally like a little more breathing room for my comics borders and gutters, Gutters allow us to take a breath but here there is so much it all feels a bit crowded and confuddled and makes it seem like things happen really fast. Overall it was a super cute comic if a bit sad I like the symbolism idea as her thoughts and attitude affect herself it seems. over all a really solid comic!
# 2
Posted:
Jun 11 2018, 04:28 PM
Me too! Let's do our best!
# 1
Posted:
Jun 11 2018, 12:14 PM
Looking forward to this!
Regular Match
Drawing Time:
2 weeks + 1
Ended:
Jul 9th, 2018
Votes Cast:
19
Page Views:
1644
Winner:
yarnwitch
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