I love that you did the hands so well.  They convey emotion almost as much as faces.  Beautiful work!

Wow, really great, quality comic.

I think you said in your notes  the first 4 pages were colored a long time ago, I noticed the pages after that, the colors seemed to improve in the rainy scenes. (forgive me if i\'m wrong)  They work really well on page 3 also: providing the mood contrast between the somber rain and the uber-happy sunny panels.  The drawings are all wonderful.
I can\'t really suggest anything for improvement except on page 7 when he grabs and hurts her wounded arm, maybe the squiggly pain lines could have radiated more from the wound instead of around her hand?  It\'s a small thing, maybe i\'m slow, but it took me a second read to understand that he had hurt her like that and so she lashed out, so i was briefly confused. But, i do realize there were many panels establishing the location of the wound so again, it\'s probably just me.
Makes me want to read more about your character and Foos a lucky dude, haha!

It\'s good to have you back! The art was very nice but I think you could have bumped up the contrast of the colors a little more. The light yellows and reds over a medium color background make it difficult to distinguish the difference between the colors. Also it might have helped to just do white word bubbles, it would have made the text far easier to read. You did a very nice job on the panel layout and the pacing worked very well. I hope you\'re going to be able to stick around this time!

Thanks so much for the comments so far.

Next time I use colors, I\'ll be sure to add more contrast. For this piece, I thought that low saturation and such would bring out a somewhat tiring/mellow mood. I guess I should\'ve played that better. So I\'ll work on it!

This was pretty cute^^

Good paneling, nothing was rushed or cramped up. There are just some parts that were a bit blury to me, but since I know nothing about coloring, I\'m just gonna say it might be me.

Glad to see you back by the way. You were one of the artists that made me wanna be part of Void a year ago^^

It\'s great

It was really professional looking. Some of the text could have been made easier to read if it was on light backgrounds or whiter text. Otherwise I couldn\'t find anything wrong with it.

I see a shy-dog!

Saw your comment on pg 11 about adding rain and yellow dots and I\'m glad you went with it. It added a good poetic touch that I believe was needed for this strip. Do whatcha like is what I say.

The colors are so pretty ;0; nice anatomy and the story was really cute :3
I agree with kuro on the panels...not much else I can critique on D:

Great comic!

this was fun to read.. im glad i finally am getting to see it.. and possibly start something thats been in the works for what seems like forever... i think ill be battling angie here in june and then hopefullly not too long after that ill have time to put my side up...

thanks for gettin this out chia.. im glad to see these two finally together in something other than Pr0n Jams and Match maker pics heheh.

Awesome colors....Looking foward to Foo\'s side.

nice work chia!
some of the panels didn\'t contrast very well (at least with my monitor) with the rain & looked a little muddy, but otherwise solid stuff. and i enjoyed it for someone who didn\'t know the back story haha

-J