King of Monsters Tournament: Round 2 / Headhunter vs. Leviathorah

King of Monsters Tournament: Round 2 — Headhunter vs. Leviathorah

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by neens

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hoagies
Artist
7 comments
# 17   Posted: Aug 19 2007, 07:18 PM
Duredhel: i really like the headhunter concept, but its not being incorporated too much into the battle, feels more like a giant lizard with friends. Excellent art, still. Also, those photos at the end of the battles are great.

Fence: battle started strong, but obviously fell apart in the end. those first couple pages were solid gold, kinda like a morbid kid\'s book. the pacing and expressions were great.  i feel that fence represented headhunter much better than duredhel, with the whole multiple head dynamic.

Kotori Ky
Artist
216 comments
# 16   Posted: Aug 15 2007, 09:45 AM
Dure, I completely enjoyed your battle this time around. Ignoring the rushed nature(you were gone, neh?) I really liked what you did. You added the people and how the huge battle was effecting the city and people and I really enjoying seeing that. Add in Logos appearing and tying shit into your current character storyline and you had me. Unlike some, I really LIKED that you added the comedy in. It lightened things and let me snicker at Headhunter in a way I honestly didn\'t think I\'d get to. Honestly, I loved it. Really really loved it. I like weird twists out of the blue like that, esp for such normally serious characters.

Only complaint would be the size of the sound effects. I don\'t mind sound effects for everything, but then I read a lot of manga and EVERYTHING gets a sound effect in manga. And I don\'t have anything against them being IN there, since fence has her own. \"glance\" \"stomp stomp\" etc. You just need to work on placement for text. But then, the text also added a degree of flavor to me, so I didn\'t mark you down much at all. To me, it just added a very Godzilla-battle-type flavor to it. So eh. *shrug*

Fence: Maaaan, Levi is so damn cute and puppy-ish, I hate to see this unfinished. But shit happens and what you do have up is adorable. The latter penciled half was a bit too hard to read, so I can\'t add much crits or comments there... and as it is unfinished I don\'t know how much I can say otherwise. I loved how you used Rawk Battru\'s head and Levi\'s little \'not him again\' and so on. Very cute.

All in all, kudos to Dure. And God damn, your dog is adorable.

Blink
12 comments
# 15   Posted: Aug 15 2007, 02:24 AM
Yea guys I like the fact that both of you used the rock bat in every each way. The drawing looks awesome for both too. Dure man you gotta stop making excuses on the last page, athough the picture stuff is nice, I\'d never had noticed they were rushed pages. Don\'t make excuses, make more omakes or whatever those are.
And you fence... you style is awesome, and even the unfinished pages had a bit of information to be had but... well... they were unfinished right? This time my votes go for headhunter, but I\'d hate to see the end of Leviatorah ;p

Phill
Artist
895 comments
# 14   Posted: Aug 14 2007, 11:14 PM
You know, I wasn\'t very impressed with either comic...

Dure: Dude, artistically you pretty much won, the first half of the comic really got me a readin\', then I saw the other half of your fight and you completely lost me... Half of the damn comic was fucking sound effects! And why the sudden turn for comedy?! You fucking had this fight within the first couple of pages, then you pull a 180 and completely remove what GOOD storyline you had going on there!

And if you\'re going to rely on sound effects for comedy in a comic, read the comics at    http://spookingtons.com . You did a good job on this comic, I\'ll give you that, but after reading it, it just didn\'t sit too well with me.


Fence: I seriously wish that you had taken some more time in order to finish this comic, other than that this was the more entertaining of the two comics, to me at least. It was a very nice blend of comedy mixed with action, and I found it to be more enjoyable and a bit easier to read of the two. Still wish you would have finished though.


My vote went to Fence, but Dure stole my quality vote.

pi-e
Artist
31 comments
# 13   Posted: Aug 14 2007, 06:56 PM
First thign I noticed was yer new SFX font, Diego. This battle was actually more entertaining for me than the previous one because you managed to make it like a horror movie for me. You turned cute lil Levi into somethign villainous and I wanted to root for HH even though technically he\'s a bad guy himself >__>;; Your BWs were a little ont he messy side but that can be forgiven considering your lack of time. I love your pension for comedic ends, and you did make HH cute XD

OMG Levi is just so cute ;__; I really wish you coulda finished your half, Fence, because those pencil lines looks great as it is. I love Levi\'s monster personality--reminds me of my new puppy who just eats everything he finds on the floor. It just makes me sad that Levi might hafta be put out in this round cuz you weren\'t able to finish your half which i\'m sure would have made a much stronger impression on everyone.

All in all you guys did a great job for being short on time. I\'m satisfied and I wish whomever wins the best of luck.

IWIHASCOE
Artist
178 comments
# 12   Posted: Aug 14 2007, 10:29 AM
Can\'t wait, can\'t wait ;_;

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 11   Posted: Aug 13 2007, 11:25 PM
uploaded.. sorry for the incompleteness guys! I feel bad, I was in Chicago for WW and stuff and not once did I feel like drawing. I tried at least, bad timing on my part I suppose so shame on me. Say good night Levi.

Duredhel
Artist
114 comments
# 10   Posted: Aug 13 2007, 10:10 PM
Battle uploaded! I\'ll go die now.

IWIHASCOE
Artist
178 comments
# 9   Posted: Aug 13 2007, 09:02 PM
go go go go!!!!!

oh shada
Artist
103 comments
# 8   Posted: Aug 13 2007, 08:11 PM
UGH UGH UGH please now!!

odd13
Artist
109 comments
# 7   Posted: Aug 13 2007, 03:40 PM
Nice, can\'t wait for this. :D

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 6   Posted: Aug 10 2007, 06:47 AM
gosh guys I dunno if I\'ll be finishing.. Chicago is proving to be bad drawing time haha

IWIHASCOE
Artist
178 comments
# 5   Posted: Aug 6 2007, 08:07 AM
Dure, I\'m on that boat, no worries XD College was killing but now I\'m able to start drawing the pages. Good luck for both of you, let\'s rock!

Duredhel
Artist
114 comments
# 4   Posted: Aug 5 2007, 10:24 PM
Whoa! there\'s so much expectation and hype being generated by this tourney :O!

XD anyhow, glad to be back :3
off to start the battle.

Yosai
Artist
74 comments
# 3   Posted: Jul 31 2007, 01:37 PM
YAY!
.... oh right, no dure for few days >.>;

neens
Approval Committee
266 comments
# 2   Posted: Jul 31 2007, 12:35 PM
:O

ohboyohboy

pi-e
Artist
31 comments
# 1   Posted: Jul 31 2007, 11:46 AM
Haha, and it\'s ironic that dure is gone for another week on a roadtrip X3 I\'ll wish my good luck to Fence then!

Make this hot <3

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Ended: Aug 19th, 2007
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